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"her mouth speaks from that which fills her heart" Luke 6:45

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October 2015

Free contest for writers of Young Adult Fiction! I’m always up for a free contest!

New FREE contest for writers of Young Adult fiction http://tinyurl.com/nz6n2p8 Judged by agent @ericsmithrocks, via @chucksambuchino

Query letters are like 8th grade gym class

You know where I’m going with this…it’s gym class, you’re 13 or 14, Aunt Flo just showed up unannounced and that’s not the worst of it. Your mom still won’t let you shave your legs with the real razor – just the electric one that only barely does the trick.

And you, dear writer, would rather go back to that day and walk three miles each way – uphill! – than write that query letter.

Or worse yet – the synopsis.

Now in my fourth year of patiently querying, I consider myself an expert and offer up my advise.

And my advise is this: it’s not you, it’s me. It really really is. It’s your 8th grade gym class, or maybe high school algebra or whatever it is that you dread, fear, cannot stand another thought of.

It’s all of your fears coming to light, and you can fight your fears! Your wrote a novel for crying out loud – you can write three paragraphs. I believe in you, you believe in you, the agents you will be querying believe in you too! They need you – us – as much as we need them, and the name of the game is to never let yourself forget it.

Your query letter should be, simply, clear, concise and professional. It is a snapsnot of your work and like anything in life it is all in the presentation. In general, agents want you to succeed, they make money when you make money, and not a moment before. So put your big girl panties on (sorry guys, you can keep sporting those Underoos) and craft the query.

Most agents want the same thing – three paragraphs.

  1. The hook – this is the snapshot of the story – your novel in a few sentences. YOU CAN DO THIS!
  2. Who are you and why should they work with you? Very simple – include the word count, the genre, any writing credentials you might have, etc.
  3. And your closing. Thank them for their time, tell them you look forward to hearing from them, working with them, their next contact – however you want to write that, whatever your style is. This is a professional solicitation, keep it simple, keep it classy.

AND THAT’S IT!

It is not by any stretch of the imagination anything like 8th grade. I promise.

Agent One-on-One: How to Craft Query Letters & Other Submission Materials That Get Noticed Boot Camp

Sharing the link for this upcoming Writer’s Digest workshop. Proves to be a super informative webinar featuring literary agents Kimberley Cameron and Elizabeth Kracht. Click for link! Writer’s Digest Webinar – How to Craft Query Letters & Other Submission Materials That Get Noticed!

All of the best quotes are Charlotte Bronte

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Query Letter: What You Don’t Know…might hurt you…

Below is my query letter for WHAT YOU DON’T KNOW sent out on submisison this year!

WHAT YOU DON’T KNOW might hurt you…

Luke didn’t know. He didn’t know why he got drunk and drove home from a keg party on a Friday night. He didn’t know why he didn’t call his dad to pick him up. Or Sarah or Olivia, who would both do just about anything he asked. What he did know was that it landed him a DUI, complete with a mandatory stint in group therapy. And he didn’t know when he first walked into “group” that he’d meet a girl who’d change his life.

Luke didn’t know the reason Cami from group didn’t talk about home. Or why she never asked him there. He didn’t know why she let a guy ten years older buy her a car, or why he never argued with her about her seeing both guys. He thought he was just along for the ride…until he found out that WHAT YOU DON’T KNOW might hurt you…

Gritty and raw, complete 55,000 word contemporary YA novel WHAT YOU DON’T KNOW is teen literature built for the big screen. Luke is the typical lost high school kid, dealing with his perfect older brother and his parent’s divorce when a DUI exposes more than just one bad decision. While attending group therapy as part of his penalty, he meets Cami, the damsel in major distress hiding behind good looks and a flashy smile. And Luke thought he grew up fast.

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